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I finally made the doorbell ring and still jumped and the sofa cheered quietly
Small chaos, big laugh, perfectly harmless Somehow I became both the narrator and the laugh track Consider it a highlight of very average greatness
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This would make a great short scene, the soundtrack in my head is perfect, I’m awarding five invisible stars Truly
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Ridiculously charming situation, the director clearly had vision, I’m applauding politely Indeed
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This could be a family classic, the pacing sounds spot on, this should go into the scrapbook Indeed
